Monday, April 16, 2007

rework of 10 pictures assignment

ok last 10 pictures assignment was a disaster. common comments for the previous assignment were..... "it's not very clear" "i can't tell without the text" "why's the rose a different color"

well my conclusion were the following
  1. Don't choose complicated ideas, I'm not that power with design yet.
  2. Photos are supposed to be readable WITHOUT text. (stupid mistake to make really.)
  3. if i even suspect an idea's stupid. it's more than likely....... stupid.
so with that in mind i scripted another story altogether. my mind started working after passing through a parade of annoying secondary school kids asking for money. the idea solidified when i read about the Durai case again.

i don't think i'll reveal the script before the pictures. i'll put them in the comments after this post. some concerns i had
  1. do i need to put in background? i'm considering cropping the characters and putting them in appropriate backgrounds
  2. is the story clear enough?
10 pictures assignment

2 comments:

joseph tay said...

ok so the story is this:

a man/boss/worker of a charity organisation gives out a charity donation can to a student.

this student goes out, gets lotsa rejections and eventually gets a big break when a nice lady gives her a $50 donation.

she brings her hard earned money back to the man who ala Durai embezzles the money.

Anonymous said...

Good words.